Searria H.

This was a beautiful poem. It sort of reminded me of the song, "In Flander's Fields." As has been said, your imagry was excellent and I loved the subtle metaphors ...

This was a very nice poem with a well-written analogy. The flow was very broken, and I had trouble finding a rythym, and since this poem sort of has a ...

I really like this poem, but I do have to agree with West. Sometime, it seemed as though you were trying a little too hard. Oh, and the Lyric Poetry ...

Very nice poem. I really like the title as well. Since this is obviously a free-style poem, I'm not going to nag about rhythm and patterns, etc. It would almost ...

Okay. This was interesting. Low tree branches whacked him in the face, but he kept going ignoring the brief stinging. I think you could revise this sentence to be a ...

This really made me laugh because when I was little, I tripped over a door mat and apologized to it. I'm just weird like that. I'm not sure that your ...

I'm not a big fan of cinquains. They seem too limiting to me. To pull a poem like this off, you need to use really descriptive words and you have ...

Cute poem. I once wrote a short story about eating cherries because I have a very strange way of eating them. Anyway... Your rhyming pattern is constant, but your rythym ...

Okay, Aloe made me a little confused. I thought your main Character was a girl! Thanks for clearing that up Vamp. Allrighty! Very interesting. The whole cat neko think makes ...

Hmm. Slightly confusing, but intriguing! Terribly sorry that I haven't reviewed this until know, but school has been theiving all of my spare time. The poem at the beginning was ...

*shutters* This was kinda intense. As Demeter said, her thoughts and flashbacks should be in italics, especially her first thought, Freedom is not what I thought it would be because ...

:smt041 'nuff said, but I'll say more. :D This was one of the most original pieces of poetry I have ever read. Usually, when people think of funny poems, the ...

Very nicely written! You like carved bones don't you? :lol: It flowed pretty well, though a little confusing, but since it's the beginning, I guess it's supposed to be. “ ...

Wow. I thought this was really good for a "first story about werewolves, vampires, etc." I, personally have never written one, and don't intend to any time soon, so I ...

Very interesting. I would love to read more. There were only a few typos. She fell backward, and so she did not see the fast approching earth, but rather the ...